Your Story Is Only As Good As the Enemy You Choose

Bonfire Partners
April 4, 2025

Your Story Is Only As Good As the Enemy You Choose

Every great story needs tension.
Something to push against.
Something to stand for—and something to stand against.

This is true in politics, movies, and branding.
It’s also true in PR.

And yet, most startups try to play it safe.
They launch with nice messaging. Neutral language. No hard lines. No enemies.

That’s a mistake.

Because if your story has no tension, no stakes, and no contrast—then it’s not a story.
It’s just a description.

The Best Stories Have a Villain

We’re not talking about naming names.
We’re not saying you need to go pick a fight with a bigger competitor.

(That’s rarely smart, and often backfires.)

We’re talking about choosing a conceptual enemy:

  • Bureaucracy
  • Gatekeepers
  • Complexity
  • Inefficiency
  • Outdated infrastructure
  • Fragmentation
  • Lack of transparency
  • Status quo thinking
  • Tech built by people who don’t use it
  • Industries that pretend to care but actually don’t

These are the kinds of enemies that sharpen your narrative—without putting you in anyone’s legal crosshairs.

They create contrast. They generate urgency. They make your “why now” make sense.

An Enemy Clarifies Your Position

It tells the market:

  • What you’re here to fix
  • What you’ll never be
  • What you believe needs to change
  • Why your product isn’t just better—it’s inevitable

Suddenly you’re not just a new option.
You’re the alternative.

But Be Careful Who You Name

We’ve seen founders make this mistake:
They name a specific company. A competitor. A brand.

And when you do that, one of two things happens:

  1. They hit back
  2. They get quoted in the same piece—and reframe your story for you

That’s why we encourage founders to aim higher.
Pick a target that can’t respond—an idea, a system, a problem.

Because when you take on something no one has named—but everyone feels—you get to define the frame.

If Everyone’s Happy, No One’s Listening

Polite stories don’t spread.
Tension gets remembered.
Push creates clarity.

So if your story feels soft, try this:

  • Who’s the bad guy?
  • What’s broken?
  • What are you sick of?
  • What would your sharpest customer rant about at dinner?

Find that edge—and use it.

Not to provoke.
But to position.

Bonfire Partners
April 15, 2025